Analysis of You and Me
My Heart wonders when will you touch me again
A touch that penetrates my soul
My soul wonders when will you inspire me again
An inspiration that pushes me to take control
Silly me you are no longer here
Only in my hopes and dreams do I hold you near
Please hold me within your thoughts
For you live in mine without fear of getting caught
But I’m no longer allowed to speak your name
I have to hide my feelings, things are no longer the same
Someone is where you were
How I got from there to here is a blur
There is passionate love but it isn’t the same
You were not only my first love but my best friend, no one is to blame
I envy those around you that don’t include me
I hope one day we can be friends like it use to be
| Scheme | ABABCDEFGGHHGGII |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11101111101 0111011 111011101101 101011011101 101111101 100110111111 1110111 111010111101 11110011111 11111101111001 11110 1111111101 11100111101 10110111111111111 110101111011 1111111111111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 711 |
| Words | 149 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 16 |
| Lines Amount | 16 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 567 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 149 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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