Analysis of Writer's Block



He read a poem about his mother,
moving me enough to walk over to him after the reading was over,
but the words I wanted to say condensed
and sat cold and slippery on the hand
I offered him.
I wanted to tell him that his words were
beautiful enough to copy into my quote book,
one of my favorite things,
a selective selection. I wanted to ask him
how I could make someone's quote book--
how to write something that wasn't what one
of my professors calls a "burp poem,"
a regurgitation of youthful hormones
stuffed in thin, plastic bags,
overflowing like the dumpsters of beer cans
behind the row, smelling just as foul.
There are poems in my toes, at the bottom of
my feet; each day they flatten,
crushed under my weight, molding to my
instep . . . never making it to my fingers.


Scheme AABCDAEFDEGHIJKLMGNO
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101001110 1010111101110010110 1011101101 0110100101 1101 1101111110 1000111001111 1111001 0010010110111 1111111 1111011011 1101010110 011101 101101 1001010111 010110111 111001110101 1111110 110111011 1101011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 760
Words 146
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 607
Words per stanza (avg) 148
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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