Analysis of With the cloak of humility



WITH THE CLOAK OF HUMILITY

Not blowing trumpets of titles
 Not raising the flag of medals
 Not drumming the rolling achievements
 Not using the mouth of conceitedness

Stepping down to reach the ordinary
 Sharing wisdom into the ground streaming level
 Plunge with servility to save the drowned
 Searching the truth of true compassion

Clean their deeds by exemplifying our within
 Respect them with high notes of value
 Paint them with good imagery of dignity
 Attune them with the music of harmony and friendships

Swim with their burdens with camaraderie
 Remove clothes of vanity and share the openness of hearts
 Soak with the reality and touch the lives under our skin
 With our bare hands, let us eat our pride to join with others
        with the cloak of HUMILITY

by Bong Herbert Guitang


Scheme A bbxb axxx cxax axcxA x
Poetic Form
Metre 10110100 11010110 11001110 110010010 1100111 101110100 101001011010 1111101 100111010 111101001001 011111110 11111001100 01110101100010 1111010100 011110001010011 11010010110101 1101111110111110 10110100 11101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 780
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 5, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Herbert Guitang

I started making poems when I was in high school. Creativity and Imagination develop every poem I do. The level of our maturity in poetry brings us self happiness and soar us in all kinds of being and life. I studied Music Composition in University of the Philippines. Through this, it spreads more deepness and bliss to my art and poetry. I believe, INSPIRATION comes to all things within and outside us. INSPIRATION that unifies and serve as LIFE to our being. Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/bongherbert.guitang Twitter: https://twitter.com/herb3127 more…

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