Analysis of Violent Wings
Memories, they are such a funny thing,
popping in and out of the mind's cruel ways,
some leave nothing but wild insanity
that cool emotions can not ever breach,
others take charge and pour words from the pen.
Inspiration hits me now with brute force,
from seeing other's penned situations,
I shall begin then, coldly stare madness.
Hot summer existence - childhood soaked rays,
the happy family sat together;
locked inside the television's strange ways.
Heat beat whiskey breath that lingered in air,
I removed my shirt not thinking it would
lead to my doom - feathered violent wings soared;
shadowing the lazy sun's windowed form,
a belt screamed pain in a back freshly torn,
escape a dream in someone else's head.
Later, as tears ironed the blue creased pillow
bafflement roamed through old tired corridors,
ache, sweat and blood dished out without a blink,
alcohol's smile from its proud warriors.
To this present day, even though wet words
saturated the question of, why dad?
No answer was given in open truth,
'I saw myself in you,' a casual lie.
Toughen this image that reflects one's own,
make the boy a vessel to carry pain,
fighting my time within growing up land,
in the cold reminded stain I'm here now.
I forgive you though, with all of my love.
Scheme | XAXXX XXX AXA XXXXXX XBXB XXXX XXXXX |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 1001110101 10001101101 1110110100 1101011101 1011011101 010111111 110101010 1101110110 110010111 0101001010 101010011 1110111001 1011111011 11111010011 1000101101 0111001101 010101101 10111001110 111110100 1101110101 11111100 1110110111 100010111 1101100101 1110101001 1011010111 1010101101 1011011011 0010101111 1011111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,228 |
Words | 220 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 3, 3, 6, 4, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 142 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
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Submitted on June 04, 2010
Modified on April 14, 2023
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