Analysis of Treat Yourself

Perry Campanella 1948 (FL)



My woman was my Spouse
she was all about 'Our House'
 was 'Top Dog' in my domain,
  My woman had a Ball
 She will (flee) "flea on me"
   should I ever 'Stall'
It's not about our money
    She has it 'ALL'
It's not about any one-thing
on that One Hand, or
      if my shoe fit's
She didn't want me to fall
 my woman did know Love
would not except thee 'REST'
  She came to me halfway
as I would always do my 'BEST'
my Honey or myself could never
'Tip-Toe' through our loving home
we simply had to "Treat Ourselves"
" Once upon a time"


Scheme AABCDCDCEFACGHIHJKLM
Poetic Form Etheree  (45%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110111 11101101 1110101 110101 111111 11101 11011010 1111 11011011 11111 1111 1101111 110111 110111 111111 1111111 11011110 11110101 110111001 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 514
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 379
Words per stanza (avg) 105
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Submitted by PoetPerryCampanella on May 29, 2017

Modified on April 21, 2023

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Perry Campanella

I first started writing songs, so I thought - at ten years-old ( so young ) I didn't let anyone see them and burned all for a great fire. I was later encouraged to write by a nun - a Catholic nun, whom did hear me singing while washing pots n pans, after which she provided me a slice of her pie and saidyou need to join our choir for the talent you have needs not pots n pans to drown-out your lovely voice; Shy then and now I did as she asked; So she would come -by to hear me sing. after which another slice of pie would be offered. We would sit together and write poetry and to this day I haven't washed a single pot or pan! Though I'll bet-ya I can "spot a poem to pen" more…

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