Analysis of Totem Psychosis



Cresendo of wind pumping through my veins
Singular pulse of light now black
Inhale, now lift thine eyes to feel
Spirit stirring, shifting within.

Glistening sweat sweeps off the brow
Enveloping ring of fire
Pulse drumming, heart dancing, electrify
Ancient riddle of the crow.

Destined kin or delusional whim
Thoughts muddle as we soar the heights
Falling, plunging, you mock my doubt
Cacophony of crude laughter spirals.

Wisdom of whimsy, delight of the gods
Awaken, child atop the cool green moss
Fleeting glimpses, gentle tug of my hair.
Alas, black feather lead me home.


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 10011111 01111111 10101001 10011101 01001110 110110010 1010101 101101001 11011101 10101111 0100111010 1011001101 0101010111 1010101111 01110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 558
Words 94
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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saffiregreek

Beverly Jordan here. I live in the mountains of NC and love to write my random nonsense down in the form of poetry. I'm the mother of 2 wonderful girls. Thanks for stopping by! more…

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