Analysis of To Thee



For a valentine, been putting effort into editing and re-writing, adding new stuff. Please give an honest opinion. I need this perfect even if it will take me all night ! Thanks
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Prudent chirps a natures bird
To sing hope on tongue of tongues
Where speaks a passioned heart
Which grow'st with affection

Upon appealing and snaring eyes
And doth they ever so lighten
This forlorn little bird
Who wonders upon thee

To guide his thriving heart
Into a mystery if prefered
Which too will tint his virtue
Upon a new found solicitude

So will thou accept his gaiety?
Or disregard this little birds vow
For his heart will never beat
Until thine is met sweet

Happy Valentines Day !

2/12/13 ~ Erwin Jung


Scheme X AXBC XCAX BAXX AXDD X X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 101011010011000110101111110010111011011111111 1 1010101 1111111 11011 1111010 010100101 01110110 101101 110011 111101 010100101 1111110 01011010 1110111 10111011 1111101 011111 10101 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 678
Words 122
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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