Analysis of Thoughts



When I retire to bed
Some thoughts hover over my head
Some directly glue to ceiling
They enjoy overhead feeling
Some rotate along with fan
Turbulent emotions they fan

Some are kind
They fan mind
Some are smart
They fan heart
Some are super cool
They fan soul

Along with body some thoughts stretch out
With fascinating sleep their delicate bout
At last sleep wins the bout
In the sleep they get lost without any doubt

Some thoughts become clock’s hands
They furrow Time’s sands
When they rotate on clock’s dial
With moving Time their trail

Some thoughts glow like night lamp
They truly become my guiding lamp
Some thoughts cling to wall, like hanger
They hang confused clothes rather longer

Some thoughts thoughtless
They make soul an empty space
Some thoughts thoughtful
They fill soul brimful.


Scheme AABBCC DDEEFX GGGG HHIX JJKK XXIF
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 11101011 10101110 10110110 110111 10001011 111 111 111 111 11101 111 011101111 1100111001 111101 00111101101 110111 11011 1111110 110111 111111 110011101 11111110 110111010 1110 1111101 1110 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 781
Words 138
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on June 16, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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