Analysis of The Freshman



Nauseating heat:
Perspired forehead collides in relief
With a damped polka-dot hankie
Every three and the half minutes.

Restless feet,
Released from a sandal's death-grip,
Rubbing each others backs offensively-
Wanting to start a mild fight.

Faux-leathered seat,
Dripping sweat bombs down the sides,
Like a volcano in glory spits out lava-
With no apologies nor regrets.

Your heart beat:
Lost in the rhythm of the ride's bravery,
Trying to comprehend the idea of
This bus taking you to an adulthood.

Good luck, you thought,
Here I come!


Scheme AXXX AXBX AXXX ABXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1001 11001001 1011011 100100110 101 0110111 1011010100 1011011 111 1011101 100100101110 110100101 111 10010101100 1010100101 111011101 1111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 519
Words 88
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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