Analysis of Sitting in one corner



Sitting in one corner
I think about her

Sitting in darkness
I am holding her earlets

Sitting in my room
I feel taste of seperation

Sitting with my eyes open
I am hurting my soul

Sitting on the naked floors
I lay anguish at my rudenss on her

Sitting hopeless
I watch her into mobile

Sitting here
I lay paralyzed for her

Laying on the floors I realize
Why she has left me to her parents house


Scheme AA BB XC CX XA BX XA XX
Poetic Form
Metre 100110 11010 10010 111001 10011 11111 1011110 111011 1010101 111011110 1010 1100110 101 111010 10101110 1111110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 375
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted on April 14, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ravi Kant

Hello friends, I am from India. Coming to my educational details, I am an electrical engineer and currently I am in the final phases of my doctoral program. In due course of time I have imbibed some flavors of poetic thoughts, which eventually came out unconditionally, all of a sudden. I was afraid at the beginning that I won't make a good poem so I was reluctant to do so. On the other hand I started with a short story that I was little confident about. But, after 6 short stories were published I got tired. Somehow poetry was in the veins and therefore I started with one. Poetry.com came to my help, I enjoyed getting encouraging review and also tasted bitterness. But in the end, I loved sharing my poems here and enjoyed reading others as well. Now, I am perplexed on how my fear turned out to be my love. I wished to be in the top 12 ranks at least for once, so I tried. I didn't thought I could make it 1st but somehow I could manage it on 30 and 31th Oct. In course of my journey to the top list I have gone through many poems and enjoyed many of them. What I realized at the end is those poems weren't just poems. They talked about various peoples, their livelihood, their humorous wits, their sorrows, pains, love for the other, they also talked about moral and what our almighty god says. I cherished my happiness in these poems and sadness at times. I am also happy that I am a part of this community.Thanks to the Poet's community. Anyone interested to keep in touch with me, please welcome. You can send me request at these links also you will find my email here.Weblinks,1) http://arkmaniacs.wordpress.com, 2) http://www.linkedin.com/pub/ravi-kant-a/25/a6/1b3, 3) https://www.facebook.com/ravi.kant.7140, 4) https://twitter.com/ARaviKant1, 5) http://poetry.com/users/199123-Ravi Kant, 6) http://yourstoryclub.com/author/ravikant-writer more…

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