Analysis of Sea Serpent



I saw it on a stormy night
When lightning struck the sea,
The waves crushed on the sand with might
the wind howled endlessly.

I stood upon the midnight shore
The rain cold on my face,
The echo of the oceans roar
A haunting sound embrace.

Then with the lightning flash I saw
A creature through the mist,
It’s slender neck rose with the roar
Of lightning, and it hissed.

Its oval head with glowing eyes
A moment caught in light,
A creature found in myths and lies
I saw within that night.

Then with that moment it was gone
Yet in my memory,
I see it in the lightning’s sun
A serpent in the sea.


Scheme ABAB CDCD XECE FAFA XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11110101 110101 01110111 011100 1101011 011111 01010101 010101 11010111 010101 11011101 110011 11011101 010101 01010101 110111 11110111 101100 11100101 010001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 577
Words 116
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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