Analysis of Sacrifice for marriage



Sacrifice for marriage

Whether it is India, America or Africa
The occurrence is same and exact replica
The atrocity is committed and woman is made to suffer
Leaving behind deep scar of pain to bear

“Sir, I made lots of sacrifices for marriage”
Early days were romantic and within control to manage
Day was passing like river flow
I was unsure of it to set or go

I really sensed trouble for her
She was in tears and sufferer
I could visualize the complete scene
She was black diamond and nice to be seen

“If I speak of atrocity, it will cause break down”
It may be of high magnitude and unknown
To out side world and beyond imagination
I, with heavy heart, have preferred isolation

I felt pain in my heart
How long ladies have to suffer and depart?
Even if she remains loyal and trustworthy
Still she has to undergo pain and suffer with pity

I live with two kids that has emerged from marriage
I was not in good health and had suffered another miscarriage
He did nothing for our care and even inflicted injury
What could I do to him except feeling sorry?

I love my mom for her moral support
Else my ship had run aground before reaching port
I have gathered strength and decided to face
Any odd that might come across to chase

Let no lady should suffer on this count!
Even though they can withstand pressure of any amount
That is why they have addressed as mother world
Only gents must know the limit of remaining in their fold


Scheme A BBCX ADEE CCFF XXGG HHII ADII JJKK LLXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 101110001001100 001011001100 00100101001011110 1001111111 11111100110 101001000101110 11101101 1101111111 11011010 11010100 11100011 1111001111 1111010011111 1111110001 11110010010 11101101010 111011 11101110001 10110110010 1111011010110 111111101110 1110110110010010 11101101010010100 111111011010 1111101001 111110101101 1110101011 1011110111 1110110111 10111011011001 11111011101 101110101010011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,401
Words 267
Sentences 4
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 08, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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