Analysis of The Immortals

Dorothy Parker 1893 (Long Branch) – 1967 (New York City)



If you should sail for Trebizond, or die,
Or cry another name in your first sleep,
Or see me board a train, and fail to sigh,
Appropriately, I'd clutch my breast and weep.
And you, if I should wander through the door,
Or sin, or seek a nunnery, or save
My lips and give my cheek, would tread the floor
And aptly mention poison and the grave.

Therefore the mooning world is gratified,
Quoting how prettily we sigh and swear;
And you and I, correctly side by side,
Shall live as lovers when our bones are bare
And though we lie forever enemies,
Shall rank with Abelard and Heloise.


Scheme ABABCDCD EFEFGG
Poetic Form Shakespearean sonnet 
Metre 11111111 1101010111 1111010111 01000111101 0111110101 1111010011 1101111101 0101010001 1011110 10111101 0101010111 11110110111 0111010100 11110001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 574
Words 111
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 6
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 55
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 07, 2023

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Dorothy Parker

Dorothy Parker was an American poet, short story writer, critic and satirist, best known for her wit, wisecracks, and eye for 20th-century urban foibles. more…

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