Analysis of Old files



Once you wander in a wonderful world
That is only visible to your eyes
And you think it's time for goodbyes
Just spend time looking on some old files

While looking through every file you have
Look up to the skies above
Try looking into your heart and mind
Maybe that will help you find

Every single piece that made you whole
Every smile which lightens the dark inside your soul
Every feeling that took us out of control
And every obstacle that didn't take away our goal

At last you will find your way in that world
Full of hopes and wonders to the future
Try not to clean the bloody sword
And keep going like nothing of this matters


Scheme ABBX XXCC DDDD AXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 1110001001 1110100111 0111111 111101111 1101100111 1110101 110011101 1011111 1001011111 1001110010111 100101111101 0100100110101101 1111111011 1110101010 11110101 01101101110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 617
Words 121
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shir Hanochi

"life isn't measured by the numbers of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away". With my poetry, I want to make more of those breathtaking moments, to put everything I feel into words and let everyone else enjoy it as well as learning from it.English is not my first language, therefore I'd like to hear any grammar or spelling mistakes. Thank you all for understanding, and enjoy reading. :) more…

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