Analysis of My Paradise
I awake to a beautiful day,
stretch and yawn as I may,
should I get dressed just to play.
I could go skating in the park next door,
or put on some music and dance on my floor.
Maybe I'll have a picnic out on the lawn,
still batting my eyes, I stretch and yawn.
I could go out dancing, and stay till dawn,
put I did that last night that's why I'm so tired.
watching t.v. wouldn't be so hard.
Breakfast is a good idea right now.
some toast and juice and coffee , wow !
Service in bed, ''thank you ''.
Hey, did you make enough for two ?
As I stretch and yawn , I cover up my head,
Hey, why do anything, let's just stay in bed.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101101001 101111 1111111 1111000111 11111001111 1011011101 110111101 1111100111 111111111110 101110111 1010101011 11010101 100111 11110111 11101110111 1111011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 619 |
Words | 130 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 6 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 153 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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Submitted on October 16, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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