Analysis of My baby would be 6 today !



Happy birthday Sadhana,
My sweet little angel.
You would be 6 today,
If you were allowed to stay
My darling girl,
I love you.

It still hurts,
like a wound that could burst,
that i said good bye to you.
And every day my heart is torn
Knowing i have to miss you,
Knowing i have to miss all my babies
And walk the earth without you,

RIP Sadhana 05/10/2009


Scheme AXBBXC XXCACXC A
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 111010 11101 1100111 1101 111 111 101111 1111111 010011111 1011111 1011111110 0101011 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 339
Words 70
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Geni Kelepouris

I began writing when i was 16. I enjoy expressing myself through all forms of art ( my profile pic is one of my art pieces). I have had a life full of tragedies and suffer post traumatic stress. I find that art and writing soothes my soul and allows me to heal from all the pain that has been haunting me. I have an obsession with existence and love nothing more than to discuss all the different theories of why we are here. My poems cover a range of topics from love and inspiration to complete random mania. There are also some very deep poems that i needed to write to get the sorrow from my life. I just hope whoever is reading them enjoys them. more…

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