Analysis of lunacy maddend loonisy



its hot outside why is my house so cold
i will stand in the doorway and rotate
im never going to be rich when i grow old
i like the color red i even charted a flow-rate

my hair is dry so i burned a written poem
i used the ashes to smell like art my hair came home
then my scalp became dry
retention through revirginization of the olives cry

i had a freind who became ill and an abscess grew
diabetes too! lifes hard on us eh well open your mouth im almost through
all the saliva i could collect wouldnt have kept his breath
yet my virus and bacterial culture was in tune with myself via its death

the music of my parents is just fine thank you time


Scheme ABAB XXCC DDEE X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 11100101 110101111111 11010111010011 111111101010 1101011111111 111011 0101110101 110110110111 01011111111011111 10010110111111 11100010010101111011 0101110111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 636
Words 132
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on June 04, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Randy Lynn

Ive come along ways from some stranger days to show it. Now i write understanding truth and how. I know that from my ashes arose this poet. Articulating our clashes with truth he sacrifices my youth to know it. Words belong to ideas poetry belongs to dreams. Ideally ill dream of painting with your screams. Poeticly picaso-ing every thing you know, with this gramaticly illogical destruction of a poem killing the prose i show more…

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