Analysis of Lover's Fall



on the rainiest days and the moon lit mist.
i see your eyes and the tears commence.
i sing these songs of sorrow and remorse.
to a broken heart and my guitars new chords.
i want to cry no more tears.
but now your gone and i still have my fears.
I scream out loud with a muffled sound.
I scream out loud with a broken crown.
thou were my queen and your king loves you so.
though I was your king but you love me no more.
we always sung to a song of vulnerabilities.
we sang out with all of our securities.
love is no word to describe my feelings.
for love is for man and nobilities.
my feelings for you was of gods or more.
titans maybe but a love to end wars.
but start one it did in a horific battle.
now my heart fights no more for its only in shackles.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 737
Words 156
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 581
Words per stanza (avg) 156
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Submitted on August 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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