Analysis of love you
Stars rained on me .
I was happy with my moon .
But my moon fell for another sun. Damn .
I prayed nobody listened .
I cursed myself ,
and I am a dead duck now .
The Sun is happier ,
The moon more beautiful .
I watch her waning and waxing .
I dont keep my beloved in a jar ,
but I am always moon-splashed ,
feeling it every second.
I watch it all the time , but the moon said I ignore her .
I am just too small to be noticed .
I never wanted you .
I just wanted the moonlight.
But , moonlight feels alien now .
| Scheme | XXX AXB CXX XXA CXX XB |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1111 1110111 1111101011 11110 111 0110111 011100 011100 11010010 111101001 111111 10110010 11110110111010 111111110 110101 111001 1111001 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 493 |
| Words | 98 |
| Sentences | 14 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 17 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 62 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
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Submitted on January 06, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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