Analysis of love fever



My mind was racing

my face, palms were sweating

my heart in peace slowly pumping

bumping my insides

I felt I was going to explode.

My cheeks blushed red rose

she sat patiently

as the tension grows

i blank out from utter confusion

all I could do was smile.

As I fell breathlessly to the ground

Autumn leaves crunched trying to make a sound

but love was in the air

looking up at her, I saw clearly

her complextion was fair.

She came closer smelled like the beach

all I could do was stare as I heard her heart

beating through her chest.


Scheme A A A X X B C B X X D D E C E X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 111010 11011010 10101 111110101 11111 11100 10101 111110010 111111 111100101 1011101101 111001 101101110 0111 11101101 11111111101 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 533
Words 103
Sentences 5
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted by Akioyamoto on March 29, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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akio yamoto

I started writing when I was 17 and am currently 19 I'm writing for everyone to enjoy and to express my feelings hope yall like em. more…

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