Analysis of Invisible Man



I am the oddly dressed man
sitting quietly in the coffee shop's corner
writing poetry you will never read.
You never noticed me browsing through
the magazines while I waited patiently
behind you in the slowest checkout lane,
nor did you see me in the theater's crowd,
although I found you more compelling
than the show on the stage.
That night, gathering my nerve,
I almost touched your shoulder,
but lacking proper words or even
a scrap of Rossetti,
pocketed my hands instead.
Through all these things
I've never been seen,
So I brand myself invisible,
and work each day to believe
that it's the reason you've never even
looked at me.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJBKECLMNOKE
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101011 101000010110 1010011101 110101101 0101110100 011001011 11111001001 11111010 101101 1110011 111110 110101110 011010 1001101 1111 11011 11110100 0111101 1101011010 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 616
Words 112
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 507
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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