Analysis of Into our dream made for you and me oh,how I wish I'd be forever asleep



When I close my eyes and
fall into a dream the one
wish I've ever wanted is granted
it seems I finally have you
by side,I finally have you
to be mine all the happiness
and sensations i feel tricks
my mind into thinking it's all
real with each dream that seems
to last forever I'd swear this
time we're really together but
when i wake up and we're apart
i'm filled with devastation deep
in my heart if the only place we
could be is in a dream
than i wish i'd be forever asleep.
Can dream come true for me one
day? If only i could jump away
from reality into a world of dream.


Scheme ABCDDEFGHIJKLMNLBON
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 1010101 111010110 11110011 1110011 11110100 0010111 11011011 111111 11010111 11100101 11110101 1110101 011101011 111001 1111101001 1111111 111011101 110010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 556
Words 118
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 447
Words per stanza (avg) 117
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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