Analysis of Instrumental



Passion slowly reaches for lighter notes
as language blooms with possibility,
there is a waltz on the tongue's excitement,
fashionable steps which move in rhythm
to the fast-paced beat of the spirit's cries.
Sweet moments are stretched like seconds of pain
though it's pleasurable swirls of romance,
love's flutters shriek fireworks as the heavens
explode into mystery's sharp tuned thoughts,
individual sections pause for breath.

Songs of independence gather the night
and roll stars into perfumed desire,
blue winks satisfy the heart's jagged pulse
as wonder kisses the smooth skin of dreams;
coloured fascination with abstract art.
On the fractured breeze voices of angels
twist musical personality's thighs
into bright ribbons of wild history,
and salted freedom bellows its purpose,
she unfastens divine intervention.

Instrumental shadows flicker in flames,
candlelight whispers delicate magic
as tiny speckles of performance spin
with quiet laughter and intense circles;
open doors of revolving perception.
Enthusiasm shimmers with toned verse
while the future's wide-eyed looks roam courage,
it's a blur of satisfaction that slips
across time's animated character,
wings of imagination spread pure bliss.

Seductive fingerprints twirl sparks of grace
while splendour's anticipation reflects
in the shivers of feathered melody,
relaxation screams a new universe
into existence as bodies tap tears.
Elation's rapid ripples of instinct
collapse in fervour's whittled perfection,
beautiful tempered notions tenderly
explore luscious silence as minds curl up
and delve into the realms of sleep's plucked ache.


Scheme XAXXBXXXXX XCXXXDBAXE XXXDEFXXCX XXAFXXEAXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1010101101 110110100 1101101010 1000111010 1011110101 1101111011 1110001101 110111010 01011111 010010111 110101001 0110101010 11100111 1101001111 100101011 1010110110 110011 0111011100 0101010110 1101010 01011001 101010010 110110101 1101000110 1011010010 010010111 1010111110 101101011 011100100 110010111 010101111 11001001 0010110100 01010110 0101011011 11010110 010110010 1001010100 0110101111 0101011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,571
Words 236
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10, 10
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 334
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted on September 22, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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