Analysis of In the tavern gambling



Gambling
a nice caption
for a vague adventure

inside the tavern
where silks are torn
there dump the aged faces
with rapples
on their cheeks
and a pipe
which ejects smokes
fixed on their sturdy-long lips;

half intoxicated,
they call
the mr barman
"more bottles and fire!"
"i will win this draft"
shout one
"no way"
rebuck two

red-green-blue
turn the floor
as the white gin
chameleonise

grandpa spending his retirement
with top stories
of the wars.
And those gambled-off
enjoying his tales
as their eye and mouths flung open
as he plant into them
"...my team cross'd the chad...."
".....a battalion was court-martial'd that week...."

yes!they were,
for with the tavern battalion,
another war is eminent!


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (51%)
Metre 100 0110 101010 01010 1111 110110 11 111 001 1011 1111011 10100 11 01010 110010 11111 11 11 101 111 101 1011 1 11010100 1110 101 01101 01011 11101110 111011 11101 0010111011 10 11010010 01011100
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 667
Words 123
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 8, 8, 4, 9, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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