Analysis of In My Sanctuary



In my sanctuary
Every creature enjoys its glory
No fear,no tear, all things dear
No place for sorrow
No place for gun
Everything is cleared for the seer
We all of us making fun
Things always be for tomorrow
Longlasting joy,exuberant
Full of sportive  on errand
Sunshine,no hurts,no more dark
Playful and cheers what I hear
The sound of happy on the park
And all these things are what I dear.


Scheme AABCDEDCFFGEGB
Poetic Form
Metre 01100 1001001110 111111 11110 1111 1011101 1111101 111101 11 111110 1111 1001111 01110101 01111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 378
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 314
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Submitted on August 24, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lal- oma

Here are my works and pieces in which I give much of my time.I do hope you enjoy it. First of all,my heartfelt thanks go to My Lord who gives me strength to write.And then,to all of my readers,friends and my families,and to all those who render their valuable helps in time of my needs.Needless to say,particularly the Poetry.com for giving me the place to share with you.I pray to those who are interested in my poetries,who want to reproduce my humble works by any means, to inform me before publishing,at Lal-oma on facebook.com or through another means.Thanks, more…

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