Analysis of ice sis diamond, or man part one



by 2010 i saw it in my mind.
in 2011 i saw it wiff my eye.
Temple one, a Heartly two.
somthing i had said.
there is two suns.
who laughed? who cried?
could i lie?
a man with a cope, a promis of its vector.
i watched i hoped.
in three days i discovered, captured cataloged, presenting my findings to our world.
he laughed, she scaouffed, it was suffitiant.
all the children had become insane.
the reflections freethisone
a rare glimps.
my brighter sun object with friends.
we were scattered light too, once.
inature itself polarized the image seen with the unaided eye.
will you laugh? or will you cry knowing the truth?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 0111111 101011 1111 1111 1111 111 01101011110 1111 0111010101000101101101 1111111 101010101 00101 011 11011011 1010111 101100101100101 11111111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 602
Words 114
Sentences 19
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 480
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Submitted on April 24, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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louie B

My sister had inspired me. all things in poem are because i love her, for all that she did for me...scientific researcher, astronomer, inventor, author.The icon above is an interpretation of the three kings. A certain place, and time 2010 more…

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