Analysis of Heres a clue



I hope she happily moves on,
So long and goodbye.
Because you have treated her wrong,
Made her upset and got her to cry.

She hasent been feeling well,
And you making her feel lower than the floor.
If only you had a clue,
She has one foot out the door.

Im disappointed with you,
For the anger that arises within me.
To glace over at my mother,
Looking so miserably.

We all know she deserves more,
Someone that will appreciate her.
Let her live,
Instead of existing like a blur.

I know she is strong,
And is not affraid of moving on.
But one day you will wake up,
And she'll be gone before the dawn.


Scheme ABCB XDED EFGF DGXG CAXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Metre 11110011 1101 01111001 100101011 111101 01100110101 1101101 1111101 101011 10101010011 11101110 1011000 1111011 1110100 101 011010101 11111 01111101 1111111 01110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 578
Words 117
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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