Analysis of Her voice echoes



Her voice echoes my ears
As if she is with me for years
I want something more to hear
I wish if she could spell without any fear

She encourages me for poetic environment
That is something like with special comments
There I find human touch in her approach
Naturally I am drawn towards her as such

I feel like to wear her smile
Walk with her for extra miles
Talk her about on many topics
Get to know her well with basics

She has angelic appearance
“Noor” means light to have come by chance
That is not simple one but divine
One may always look for and feel fine

She may gently respond with “thank you”
Yet I want to read those angelic lines and get through
She has an asset of lovely heart
That beats for skill as an art

She is moved when I say” I shall capture”
Those moments from her face for sure
“I feel flattered “she may exclaim with joy
I have lot more to feel than her to enjoy

Why some of the people ever lasting impression?
You find no excuses for their frank confession
They speak with whatever they have in mind
Pure beating at heart with thoughts very kind

I shall cherish her as simple woman
Woman of great ideals to walk with man
Man of her choice in long life journey
That may be the desire on her part and prayer to almighty


Scheme AAXX XXXX XXBB XXCC DDEE XXFF GGHH GXII
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 011011 11111111 1110111 11111101101 10100110100100 1110111010 1111010001 100011101011 1111101 1101101 100111010 11101110 1110010 11111111 111101101 11111011 111001111 111111101011 11111101 1111111 1111111110 11010111 1110110111 11111110101 1110101010010 111010111010 111101101 1101111101 1110011010 1011011111 110101110 1110010101011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,225
Words 243
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 25, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:12 min read
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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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