Analysis of hello



hello how are you
haven't seen you in a while

its been really ouiet here
haven't seen to many smiles

searching through my memorys
of all the pictures i had of you

trying to fill my empty space
and wondering what to do

it gets very lonely here
with out you being around

my heart keeps getting weaker
as I stand on fragile ground

you always were the best to me
solid as a rock

and with out you being here next to me
my world has come to a complete stop


Scheme AX BC CA XA BD XD EX EX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 1011001 111011 1011101 10111 110101111 10111101 0100111 1110101 1111001 1111010 1111101 1100111 10101 0111101111 111110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 460
Words 97
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on April 25, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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