Analysis of God is merciful



Let someone stop this endless rain!
I would like to live the spring.
Look at those poor birds!
Just tell me why they stopped singing.

The heart lost all its joy.
In the hands of the cruel,
Love is nothing but a toy.

I keep asking myself ‘where is the spring?’
Let someone tell me why it is late again?
I just want to break this rusty chain.
I just want to end this pain.

As the prayers keep my tongue busy
In a corner, it’s me feeling dizzy.
In search of miracles, my eyes are.
Though this longing is a painful scar.

In the darkest moment of the night
I sit on my chair, dreamy and quiet.
Suddenly I hear a knock on the door
I become hopeful more and more.
Where is the spring?
When will the birds sing?

Let me pray one more,
Saying this will be accepted.
Who knows the sun will shine tomorrow,
Who knows the spring will come soon.

When all the colors leave one by one
When all the memories run,
There stays just black and white.

I know these hands are sinful.
I know the tongue is sinful.
But hope is still there,
God is merciful.
When the lovers are painful,
They still know God is merciful.


Scheme ABXB CDC BXAA EEFF GXHHBB HXXX IIG DDXDDD
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 1111101 11111 11111110 011111 0011010 1110101 111011101 1111111101 111111101 1111111 10111110 0010111010 011100111 111010101 001010101 1111110010 1001101101 10110101 1101 11011 11111 10111010 11011101 1101111 110101111 1101001 111101 1111110 1101110 11111 11100 1010110 11111100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,066
Words 216
Sentences 24
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 6, 4, 3, 6
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on July 29, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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