Analysis of Free Me Now Or Let Me Just Die Instantly



As I weep, night becomes cold and long...
Darkness seems to cover every inch of hope
An injury of injustice is torturing my heart
Will the dawn of hope still coming, soon?

The sadness I felt, wound deepens fiercely
My courage weakens as I fearfully struggle
For in this battle I did receive a mortal blow
Is this another insult to my rotten injury?

Alas, I grieve not for losing the combat of men!
For a kind of defeat beyond power of mankind
But I wept for don't deserve the price I pay
My heart bleeds for the crime I have not sinned.

Yes, am mortally wounded so I crave for mercy
Heal my wounds and let me see the rising sun
Untangle my hands from unjustly punishment
I beg, free me now or let me just die instantly!


Scheme XXXX AXXA XXXX AXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 111101101 101110100111 11001010110011 101111101 0101111010 1101011110 1011011010101 11010011110100 0111111001011 1011010110111 11111010111 1111011111 1110010111110 11101110101 010111010100 1111111111100
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 704
Words 139
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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