Analysis of Forever lover



My heart is crying out loud
Am I now in my real world?
to where I am
with my forever lover's arms?

coz' I'll always remember
this lovely day with you
when your voice started dancing
in my head to toe
it travels to my brain
flows like a river
thru my veins
then it shoots out
from my toes
reaching out, now clinging
more deeply
within my soul...

I can hear music playing
for so long I have never
just then I remember
that I knew this kind of feeling

Yes with this....I may say,
I am with you my forever lover!
but really...
Have we finally found each other,
coz' if we truely are
surely through we'll be shining...
And as we united
Our true joy,
Our sweet laughters,
and all of these we will know
for the whole universe would glow
with thunder....

Oh! Forever Lover
we must come together
we breath, we love
we will have more joy!

You and Me with ALL that IS
Forever!


Scheme XXXA BXCDXBXXXCEX CBBC XBEBXCXFADDB BBXF XB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 1110111 1111 11010101 111010 110111 1111010 01111 110111 11010 111 1111 111 101110 110 0111 1111010 1111110 111010 11111110 11111 1111101010 110 111001110 11111 1011110 011010 1011 1011 0111111 1011011 110 101010 111010 1111 11111 1011111 010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 828
Words 171
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 12, 4, 12, 4, 2
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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