Analysis of Feel Forever



I want to know you forever
I don't mean wrinkles and grey hair,
though I know you will grow old in my arms
I mean the fingers of toddlers, scabbed kindergarten knees
to know the sweet warmth of children's breath,
the question of growing bodies
What could we have shared, the secrets of first grade,
giggling through clouds of glue and chalk dust
I want to climb into your skin at ten, feel your freckles as my own
watch as later, together, we change, love building
I want to know you forever, feel your alarming energy as my own
when we entered this world side by side,
bathed in the warm love of our mothers' wombs
I want to put my fingers on your mouth,
the press of your new teeth against my own baby skin,
the cut of red gums aching in the same light
I want to know you forever
cradle each other from soft baby hair through the young stiffness
and back to the silky drift of old age,
to feel you forever.


Scheme AbcdedfghihjcklmAnoa
Poetic Form
Metre 11111010 11110011 1111111011 1101011011001 110111101 01011010 11111010111 1001111011 11110111111110111 111001011110 1111101011010100111 111011111 10011110101 1111110111 0111110111101 01111100011 11111010 101101110110110 0110101111 111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 889
Words 176
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 715
Words per stanza (avg) 176
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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