Analysis of Fallen Ones are Stars



Walk with me little one and you will see,

Where the fallen ones go to sleep...

Listen close and you will hear!

The wings of an angel flapping away,

Taking the fallens to their final resting place...

Through the mist that blankets the graves!

"Are they going to be okay..?"

Don't cry little one it's alright,

The angels are taking them to the sky,

Where they are turn into beautiful stars that light up the night,

Have you see a falling star at any point in your life?

Have you wish upon it with all your might?

Maybe one day you will be a shining star at night..?


Scheme X X X A X X A B X B X B B
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010111 10101111 1010111 0111101001 10011110101 10111001 1110111 1110111 0101101101 111101100111101 11101011101011 1110111111 1011111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 551
Words 109
Sentences 8
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on July 03, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ishmael Balfour

I started to read poems when I was 10 years old and was liking writing poems each day. Years later my mom was happy and glad I was writing small books and poems but sadly I lost her when I was only 15 years old and Remember's Day was the day she passed. Since then it has been two years and I wanted to make a poem group on facebook so I did. Couple months went by and my school started a poem group too so I joined. Friends and teachers told me I made amazing poems couple of my friend said they cried and so did some of teachers too. I kept on writing poems and get 14 followers in my poem group but I wanted more. Now I'm here posting my poems to the world all because of friends, family and teachers for being there for me. Thank you all :) more…

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