Analysis of Fake Friends!



How in the world these people exist,

They aint dead nor afflicted with fist,

They bring forth darkness cause my days are'nt crisp,

Their kind wait for opportunity,

Seperate the whole community,

Don't believe your soon to see,

The enemy they laud,

Know for show it aint God,

If you ask my opinion it's the Devil's minions,

Its the ones we forgave and still befriend them,

They still do wrong that's why they grinin,

It's always the ones that's close to you,

Being a friend is what most of them suppose to do,

If you're a wretched soul hell fire will be roasting you,

You may die violant from someone smoking you,

You've been figured out there's no more hope for you,

I don't fall for okie dokes nomore so the dope is you,

You can't see karma so you still do evil,

Mad at the world but it's you who's feeble,

Retribution is the only solution,

Your minds altered from all the worlds pollution,

Shaitan wants to take you with him so he's recruitin.

I don't want your friendship,

I want to punch your d*mn lip,

But knowing God is revenge,

The final day is your end,

You're theiving and soothsaying on all men.


Scheme A A X B B B X X X X C D D D D D D E E C C C F F X X C
Poetic Form
Metre 100111001 111101011 1111011111 11110100 1010100 1011111 010011 111111 1111010101010 10110101011 11111111 11011111 1001111110111 11010111011101 111111101 11101111111 1111101110111 11110111110 1101111110 0101010010 11101101010 1111111111 111110 11111111 1101101 0101111 1101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,092
Words 207
Sentences 2
Stanzas 27
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on April 23, 2015

Modified on April 19, 2023

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Al-qahira Bakra

I'm an historical poet from under the old management of poetry.com.I've been submitting since 1999.It all started when Montell williams had a contest for poetry to raise money for M.S.My first poem submitted was published.The aroused Third Eye in the book called enternal portraits.This book was sold around the world.This is the first time fans have seen what Mark Robinson looks like.That was my name til I changed to Al-Qahira Bakra.You can find me on Facebook under this name.I also had two other publication in books sold around the world and one placed on C.D,that was ressurection.Climax was published before that and I was in california.They wanted me to come back to the east coast to recite climax in washington D.C to 1,000,000 people.I'm back now and apologize to my fans.I was also recognized as one of the greatest poets of the 21st century and I possibly still am.Well let me show you that I can be number one.You will see my work cultivate from poetry to lyrics and then you will see what level I'm on. more…

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