Analysis of Everybody stares



Why everybody stares at me?
 As if I have fallen from tree
 like ripe fruit to be grabbed
 to run into life and stab

As a young girl I knew nothing about  affairs
 It was not considered good or fair
 Yet it is young age and waits for none
 The nature performs an act to be done

I may be loved by so many and praised
 I am beautifully looked after and elegantly raised
 It makes difference when you are gifted with talent
 It is considered gift from the god as if heavenly sent

How all of sudden  the garden is  visited by so many birds
 Makes permanent refuge, build the nests and fly skyward
 Sunshine may help flowers to come out
This how the girls are talked about

I am always feared by mistrusts
 I knew that some precaution is must
 Yet some errors on my may take place
 As so many may be attempting to run into the race

It is all the more important to whither the storm
 It is same for all and it may certainly come
 Here is  finest hour where I have to take decision
 Not enough time is left for any kind of precision

For any girl it may be difficult way
 Thorns may be found but will have to be pushed away
 It is life time remembrance and has to be weighed
 The life must be moved further and not stayed


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Poetic Form
Metre 1100111 11111011 111111 1101101 101111100101 111010111 111110111 0100111111 1111111001 11100110010001 1110011110110 110101101111001 11110010110011101 1100101010110 11110111 11011101 1111101 111101011 111011111 111011010110101 1110101011001 111110111001 11101011111010 10111111011010 11011111001 111111111101 111101001111 0111110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,207
Words 241
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 26, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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