Analysis of Eclipse of the Moon



Tonight,
the moon bewitched me,
entranced me.
Then I gazed into your eyes
and forgot about the moon.

Tonight,
you are my moon
and my stars.
Only your eyes could
compete with their beauty.

Tonight,
the moon has vanished,
it can't be found.
Gazing beyond the stars, I ask,
"Where are you?"


Scheme Abbxc Acxxb Axxxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 01 01011 011 1110111 0010101 01 1111 011 10111 011110 01 01110 1111 10010111 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 283
Words 54
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by RonGV on May 01, 2011

Modified by RonGV on May 08, 2021

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Ron VanHooser

Ron VanHooser is from the Ozarks of southern Missouri. His poetry is the voice of a heart and soul filled with love, passion and a deep appreciation of the beauty of the world and those he shares it with. He currently resides in the wine country of southwestern Oregon. more…

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