Analysis of Drowned



A delicate inviting twinkle
Shows of blushed rosen cheaks
Unlocking thy heart
Thus flows a golden creek

Of welcomed worry
And entrusted love
But vision blurry
And blind from hope

To release of burdened sorrow
To soar among the stars
And free of all mishap
Setting thy mind free and far

Away from these waters
That soaked the ground
And left an ocean
Where thee once drowned


Scheme XAXX BXBX XAXX ACXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 010001010 111101 01011 110101 11010 00101 11010 0111 10111010 110101 01111 1011101 011110 1101 01110 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 368
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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