Analysis of don't laugh at me



i'm a little boy with glass
the one they call a geek

a little girl
who never smile
b/c she have braces on her teeth

and i no how it feels
2 cry myself 2 sleep
i'm that kid on every playground
who's always chosen last

a single teenage ' mother   2 over come my past
you don't have   2 be my freind
but is it to much to ask

don't laugh at me '
don't call me names   don't get your pleasure from my pain
in god's eyes we're all the same
some day we'll all have perfect wings
don't laugh at me.

im the criple on the cowrner'
that you pass on the street.
and i wouldn't be out here beging
if i had enough to eat
don't think i don't notice
that our eyes never meet
i lost my wife and my little boy
when someone crossed that yellow line
the day 'we laid them in the ground
is the day
i lost my mind
right now i'm down and holden this little cardboard sign
so don't laugh at me '
don't call me names
don't get  ur plesure from my pain
in gods eyes we'll all have perfect wings

don't laugh at me
im fat  'im thin 'im short  'im tall ;im deaf' im blind
can't we all  'find a way to love everyone
so please don't laugh at me
don't call me names
don't get ur pleasure from my pain
remember
in god's eyes we are all the saime
one day we all we'll have perefect wings


Scheme xa xxx xxbc cdx EfxgE hiaixixjbxdjeKfg EdxeKfheg
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 011101 0101 1101 111110101 011111 111 11111001 11101 01011010111 111111 1111111 1111 111111110111 0111101 11111011 1111 101101 111101 01101111 1110111 111110 1101101 111101101 1111101 01111001 101 1111 111101011011 11111 1111 1111111 011111011 1111 111111111111 1111011110 111111 1111 11110111 010 01111101 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,212
Words 262
Sentences 3
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 4, 3, 5, 16, 9
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on August 08, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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