Analysis of Don't Count The Numbers Of Stars



Don't count the numbers of stars,
You will get with a number of your own sins.
Instead, pray to God, so you can sleep well.

That might take you back in time,
And remember you about how many eyes had
Dropped tears. Left some who are now blind.

Even your heart will beats to remind you,
Of those people who you have broken their hearts.
Who they tired very hard to find each other pieces.

Don't count the numbers of the kilo miles,
To find out, that you are far from the route of forgiveness,
But surely you would be very first to get to hell alone by yourself.

They are thousands of flying birds on skies,
None of them will give them wings away to you sooner or later.
A cause of your balance who have more of devil spiritual inside.


Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011 11110101111 0111111111 1111101 001010111011 11111111 1011111011 11101111011 11101011111010 110101011 11111111011010 110111101111101101 1110110111 1111111011110110 011110111110100001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 728
Words 143
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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