Analysis of Diet (haiku)



Burgers...fries...and coke!
Guilty eyes - hide from diet
Breakfast - well behaved!

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Scheme XXX A AX
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1011110 10101 0100001011110110010111110001010010 1 111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 242
Words 40
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 2
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on April 10, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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