Analysis of Dad watch me.
"Look at that fool begging on his knee
for a busy, busy bee, haha I'd laugh if
that fool wasn't me"
My Dad always told me theres plenty
of fish in the sea, He'd say "Look
a miniature me!"
Like a needle and thread my dad
tried to drill knowledge into my head
It started with The art of war
and mack within
To woo a whore and attack a friend
But sadly I accomplished none of his goals
It may be tyranny but we live on two different poles
no 48 laws of power for me
some call it advance case of A.D.D.
no I call it love in anarchy
Don't get me wrong I am his oldest son
it's just he's single and hes forty one
I may be young
but o god it stung
when I made you cry
I'm not that guy,I'm not that guy
I can't go on living if I'm not being me
Just know I'll never live by his philosophy
I don't want to regret an eternity
your the best girl in the world for me
I pray I'll get to say these
special words on a beautiful day-
their used to be seven wonders
of the world.
I found the eighth
Her name is Faith
She loves cheese
I love jello
Dad watch me.
I Dedicate this poem to you
if you read this far, and still feel the same
Call me.
out of the blue
they say it's when love truly...
hits you...
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111110111 10101011111 11101 11111110 11001111 01001 10100111 111100111 11010111 0101 110100101 11010101111 111100111111001 1111011 11101111 111110100 1111111101 1111001101 1111 11111 11111 1111111 111110111101 111101110100 11110110100 101100111 1111111 101101001 11111010 101 1101 0111 111 1110 111 11011011 1111101101 11 1101 1111110 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,158 |
Words | 258 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 5, 5, 2, 4, 4, 2, 4, 2, 1, 6 |
Lines Amount | 41 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 75 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 22, 2023
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