Analysis of Chilly



As the seasons change with our feel,
eyes study the pavement and
arms protectively wrap our torsos precious.

The giddiness of summer went South and,
with the cold, focus of a buckle-down
finds me as unexpected inspiration.

The wind, the useless wind, finds its way
beyond my layers of cloth and skin to
frost my bones, thoughts, ney intentions.

As the lovely coloured leaves splotch the
grey canvas of sky only to fall in brown,
shriveled defeat I feel a longing, but not
for the season just passed.

I remember the days when I laughed at the
cold, taunting it with play in the street
and a defiance to retreat from the dark.
A time when the major obsticle was
mom's-know-best.

I learned her lessons well and now I remain
in my dimly lit room trying not to be chilly.


Scheme XAX ABX XXX CBXX CXXXX XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 101011101 1100100 10100110110 01110110 1011010101 111010010 010101111 0111011011 11111010 101010110 11011101101 10011101011 101011 10100111110 110111001 00010101101 01101011 111 11010101101 0110111011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 747
Words 140
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 4, 5, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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