Analysis of Burden for Souls



Are they burdened for the
soul of my family friends
neighbors and stranger,too
do you feel they should know
the blessed.

Lord why did he pass me up,how my heart
is burden up I have lot love you.Lord
I'm so scared I need help.I need you
I want you but you did want me and you
did'nt love me but he love somebody.

The Lord is not slack concerning his
promise as some men count slackness
but is longsuffering to us-ward not
willing that any should perish but
that all should come to repentance.


Scheme XXAXA AABBA XXAAX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111010 1111001 1001 111111 01 111111111 110111111 11111111 1111111101 11111110 011110101 10111110 1111111 101101101 11111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 477
Words 98
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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