Analysis of Breath taking



life grew
like a rope
to the far beyond
just as
the shiny new pebble
freely turned
no hesitation
hesitation was not an option
if the world
were once to hesitate
we would remain
lifeless
just barley breathing
i would
still
stand among
shadow hill
but insted
we stand
breath taken
able to catch my breath
and
to draw life
from the factor of beauty
so breath
stand
turn
and close your
golden eyes


Scheme ABCDEFGGHIJKLMNONCPGQRSTQPUVW
Poetic Form
Metre 11 101 10101 11 010110 101 1010 01011110 101 01110 1101 10 11010 11 1 101 11 11 11 110 101111 0 111 1010110 11 1 1 011 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 365
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 320
Words per stanza (avg) 74
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Submitted on March 10, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alexa Klippel

I am an 13 year old girl with dyslexia who uses poetry as an outlet. I have over 150 poems but posted only some here more…

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