Analysis of Breath swings-2



Moreover, colourless flag unfold for my sake
Melted away Rainbow of life with moans in heart
Time pinned me to relax upon my shoulder
 Squeezed the Light for dark
However, I remained unperturbed
To adorn the hour for me
More dear than before
Without smell without touch
Without taste without wonder
Swung my breath deep within
To die with dark
For the sinless streams
And a deathless wings
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Scheme ABCDEFGHCIDJK
Poetic Form
Metre 0101101111 10011111101 11110101110 10111 1010101 10101011 11101 011011 0110110 111101 1111 1011 0011 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 404
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 319
Words per stanza (avg) 69
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Submitted on December 14, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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