Analysis of Battery low



Battery low! tun!
So beeb my phone
after unceased browsing
again and again
like the repeated
beating of a drum;

i press'd longer
confused on the philosophy it profess'd;

battery low! Tun!
It beeb again
this time,
with a corresponding---
"battery empty"tun!tun!!tun!!!

I opened the back cover,
disengaged a piece,
with the inscription---
'original battery'
and,
'made in china';

why 'low' and 'empty'
when it still maintain it actual size and weight?
Is that really the battery?

I inserted it back
pressed my 'on' botton,
the white light dimmed twice,
i saw it again,
'battery low tun!'screams the first......
And,
'battery empty tun!tun!tun!!!'
a friori,it went flat

if what i saw was
really the battery,
then,dear investor of my chat box are ignoramuses;

for if it were to be---
'low current flow'
'current empty'......
It would have made great sense


Scheme Aabaxx cx Aaxba cdaeFa exe xaxaxFax xed exex
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 1111 10110 01001 10010 10101 1110 01100100101 10011 1101 11 10010 1001 1100110 00101 10010 0100100 0 1010 11010 111011100101 11100100 101011 1111 01111 11101 1001101 0 100101 0111 11111 100100 1010111111 111011 1101 1010 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 815
Words 148
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 6, 2, 5, 6, 3, 8, 3, 4
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mgbada chukwudi cletus

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