Analysis of Awaiting



What are you awaiting? The primate is strange.
What are you awaiting? The climate is change.

What are you awaiting? The gimmick is dumb.
What are you awaiting? The mimic is mum.

What are you awaiting? The prattle is done.
What are you awaiting? The battle is won.

What are you awaiting? The villain is pawn.
What are you awaiting? The felon is gone.

What are you awaiting? The palette is blue.
What are you awaiting? The ballot is true.

What are you awaiting? The habit is bred.
What are you awaiting? The rabbit is dead.


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1110100111 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011 11101001011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 510
Words 96
Sentences 24
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on January 13, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Dean LaBenne

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