Analysis of Asim Bryan



love him more then life it's self.
I want to be with him and no one eles.
He is the rising sun on a rainy day.
For his Survival my own life I would lay.

He makes me daydream
About our future together.
Like dancing under the moon light
On a beach with tropical weather.

Or making me faint
By nilling down on one knee
Saying that he wants to
For ever share his life with me.

I would surrender my all for him.
Giving him food when he says it.
Love making the way he wants it.
And beautiful kids if he plans it.
The love I have for him should be a Monument.
Because I love you so very much Asim bryan.


Scheme XXAA XBXB XCXC XDDDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1111110111 11010110101 11010111111 1111 011010010 11010011 101110010 11011 111111 101111 11011111 110101111 10111111 11001111 010011111 011111110100 011111101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 580
Words 124
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on September 15, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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