Analysis of Apology to 'Brian Mayo' (Cheesy)



Sometimes in life we must swallow our pride
admit that we were wrong
this is one of those times.

I jumped to conclusions
making false accusations
I'm sorry for what I've done.

If only I'd gave you chance to explain
to defend your honour and your good name
for now I bow my head in shame.

I can't undo what was done
if only I could I most certainly would
I'm sorry I was wrong.

Your talent is undeniable
I'm so sorry I caused you distress
and I'm sorry I made your page such a mess.

You say that I'm forgiven
but I'll never forgive myself
I only wish I'd zipped my big mouth.


Scheme XAX BBC XDD CXA XEE CXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01011110101 011101 111111 111010 101010 1101111 1101111101 101110111 11111101 1101111 11011111001 110111 11010100 111011101 01101111101 1111010 1110011 110111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 557
Words 114
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 19, 2016

Modified on April 19, 2023

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